Literacy Homework 2.10.17

I tiptoed down the long, barren road and turned to enter the abandoned park. The rain hammered down on me and I got soaked. Suddenly, I heard something rustling in the bushes. The colour drained from my face. Immediately, I went over to have a little peek. And what I saw made me shriek in terror. There, standing in front of me, was an enormous brown bear,  feasting on a banana. It approached me. I stood back in fear. To my surprise, the bear coughed and began speaking!

One thought on “Literacy Homework 2.10.17”

  1. I like the way you’ve shown the feelings of the character. Great job!

    I didn’t know that bears feasted on bananas! How strange!

    Mr R

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